Outline
My first year
My experience and my mistakes*I poured all of my effort in selling and persuading, hoping that i could make the people see the good parts of the painting.
*I didn't select the customers and talked to whoever passed by.
*I ended up exhausted and I missed the real customers that i should've aimed for.
*I felt really depressed and down until i realized what mistake i've done.
The interesting customers i've met and talked to
The artist
My second year
My experience and my mistakes
The things that i did well
New things i learned
My third year
How i select my customers
The things i improved
Interesting customers
Afterthought
1. List the things you learned in the second and third years.
回覆刪除2. Are the things you learned in three years connected? How did they make you a better seller? For example, you learned something in the first year, and did that better your selling skills in the second year?
3. After you've given a complete outline, could you rephrase your thesis statement and say more specifically what you have learned throughout the experience?
Due date for next post: by Nov. 4 (Mon.)