Teacher Hazel thought that i could add my own feelings into the project to make it more personal. She also advised me to talk about the customers and analyze the marketing. It would be more interesting for the customers to know about these.
I was saying the same thing to Sophia the other day too. I think the only thing lacking in your writing is your feeling. Your writing ability is not a problem at all.
I was saying the same thing to Sophia the other day too. I think the only thing lacking in your writing is your feeling. Your writing ability is not a problem at all.
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